高考英語滿分作文解析及寫作素材積累：2016年高考滿分作文

1、2016 年高考英語滿分作文1.2016 年新課標(biāo)全國卷 I假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume） 。給外教 Ms Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________

2、______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】該題雖然也是文字

3、提示，屬于書信體應(yīng)用文寫作，但它同往年的命題形式大不相同。寫作要點(diǎn)沒有單獨(dú)羅列出來，而是包含在題目要求中，這對考生審題和構(gòu)思提出了較大的挑戰(zhàn)，這是前所未有的創(chuàng)新。經(jīng)過認(rèn)真審題，我們可以確定本文的寫作要點(diǎn)有：（1）簡單介紹自己、解釋緣由；（2）說明寫信的目的——修改文字和格式；（3）提示所附材料在哪里；（4）表示感謝。試題的情景是考生日常生活中熟悉的事情，題目要求明確、清晰，開放性很強(qiáng)，給考生留下了很大的自主發(fā)揮的空間?！緷M分范文】Dea

4、r Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time

5、job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are s

6、omething to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you

7、 visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua3.2016 年新課標(biāo)全國卷 III假定你是李華，

8、與留學(xué)生朋友 Bob 約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時間。注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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10、_____________________【寫作思路】題目要求寫一封道歉信，李華因不能和 Bob 一起去書店而向 Bob 道歉，文章應(yīng)使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時進(jìn)行寫作。寫作內(nèi)容包括：表示歉意；說明原因；另約時間。注意使用連接詞，使作文內(nèi)容連貫?！緷M分范文】Dear Bob,I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I

11、have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to